Warm Embrace
Everybody needs love and affection.
She more than anybody I know for inclusion .
The fact that she is the hugging type.
Who loves to be embrace plus all the hype.
She likes to feel the warmth of one's body.
She always gives a hug to a man like nobody.
So that she feels protected from all harm.
What happens around her, she gives no damn .
She needs one beside her like security.
As if guarding the President 24 hrs. for safety .
She's happy when one's there everytime.
Bodies rubbing against each other at all times.
But alas , she wants somebody's arms.
Not this man who's love for her forever burns.
But I am willing to wait no matter what.
Until the sky hugs the sea you remember that !
She more than anybody I know for inclusion .
The fact that she is the hugging type.
Who loves to be embrace plus all the hype.
She likes to feel the warmth of one's body.
She always gives a hug to a man like nobody.
So that she feels protected from all harm.
What happens around her, she gives no damn .
She needs one beside her like security.
As if guarding the President 24 hrs. for safety .
She's happy when one's there everytime.
Bodies rubbing against each other at all times.
But alas , she wants somebody's arms.
Not this man who's love for her forever burns.
But I am willing to wait no matter what.
Until the sky hugs the sea you remember that !
Nice poem and image! I like the way the rhymes and form complment the words.
Posted by
January |
4:54 PM
yeah i agree with january..but,..are you giving the girl a negative image coz all she wants is a guy in her life???or a positive that she can still wait no matter what??
Posted by
WOOT! |
6:25 PM
jan - thanks . both image & substance appeal to me !
ruth - definitely not the negative .
HE can still wait no matter what . lol.
Posted by
che |
8:06 PM
this is so romantic....
thanks 4 stopping by!
Posted by
Kai |
8:28 PM
This poem rings so true... I felt it.
Posted by
EATING POETRY |
10:10 PM
its a little sad. but i love the pic. thanks for visiting boobaloo :)
Posted by
b o o |
10:16 PM
kai - i'm a hopeless romantic . that's why !
eating p - you mean you tasted it , eating ! thanks .
angel - i'm glad it lessen the effect of this cold drizzling day !
boo - me too .
Posted by
che |
12:13 AM
Thanks for dropping by my blog Nike. I like the title and the idea of your blog.
Posted by
Lisa Johnson |
12:59 AM
thanks for dropping by at mine.
persistance, stubbornness or staying power..whichever you've got, good luck sweetie.
i hope it pays off.
Posted by
keda |
3:50 AM
anali - the title is so true .writing poems makes me sleepy !
keda - it will pay off . always had .
Posted by
che |
10:26 PM
Hi Mike!
So nice to have you visit my blog!
Such a romantic poem!
Love it!
Take care!
Margie
Posted by
Margie |
1:11 PM
very sensual picture.
i hope she doesn't make him wait too long.
Posted by
michelle |
1:58 PM
what a very beautiful poem
-and lovely picture...
this cheered me up very much:)
Posted by
sophie |
5:12 PM
I never have troulbe sleeping, maybe that's why I don't write as many poems as you! Thanks for stopping by my blog.
Posted by
Catherine |
7:59 PM
if she goes... she never was yours right??
Posted by
Neer |
8:21 AM
samuru - take care too !
michelle - same thing here
sophie - i'm glad the poem cheered you up . knowing that , cheered me up !
catherine - actually , love keeps me sleepless . lol.
neers - never ? never say never !
Posted by
che |
11:45 PM
一首美好的是诗歌！
Posted by
Unknown |
3:01 AM